I like the fact that there seems to be a mixture of surrealism and abstractness in this - great overall composition and I think the shapes of the pieces in this image look really nice. I agree wit the fact that the black could have looked more solid since it slightly knocks the effectivenss of it off a tad and the divide between the two halves in terms of the lighting puts me off slightly.
But still - great overall composition and great design.
i like the shapes and patterns, nicely done. the composition is nice too
i think the contrast between the black and white would be enhanced if the black were more solid - at the moment i can see (i want to say brushstrokes but that's not apprpriate here ) pen-strokes, which diminish the effect of the contrast to some degree. boldness is often good